2.5-3 starsStarted strong and then started to fall apart. This buzzed the wrong buttons for me. One reason I've abandoned a lot of MF literature lately is the the virgin/whore binary bores me and pisses me off. This story exploits it in spades. The interactions between Jami, Seb and Luke are well done, it's the rest of the story that drove me insane. Add in some writing issues: characters spinning in and out of the story though unrelated to this segment of the series, missing or incorrectly substituted words, and the ending which hobbled along.